The Last Beginning by Lauren James
There i’ve said it. This was one huge cheesefest.
Which means i didnt like it very much, sadly.
Her first book The Next Together was an incredibly clever concept, time travel, time loops, historical love affairs etc. and would have been an award winning novel if it had been written by a more experienced person. Sadly it came out as very tacky and the concepts were wasted with pointless drivel and cheesy love themes. I lost count of how many times the female character said, and i quote “her toes curled” when he kissed me. Ugghhh! just NO.
This one though had the means to be a really cool book too but this time it was just tooooooooooooooo predictable. I mean here we have the daughter of the couple above, finding out who her real parents were when she was 16 and her adopted parents just happened to be scientists too and who had created the worlds first time machine!
I mean, i ask you, even a monkey could guess where the book was going, and it did! I didnt even read past page 62! Somehow it seemed like a waste of my life to continue to the end so i flicked through and I was right.
She also tried to create funny sequences between her main character, the rather strangely named Clove (yes, precisely) and an AI computer character. The humour was somewhat stilted though and felt rather forced. perhaps stick to scientific plots for now eh?
Are there any positives? Yes actually. Her ideas for a YA novel were really on target for originality, I loved in both books the mix of historical and modern day parts which has normally only been done in Adult novels and the covers of both books are scrummy. Hoepfully she will continue to improve as a writer in the future.